Grade my SAT essay, please.

WasatchWriter
Fri, 19 Dec 2014 16:39:40 +0000

Your examples must become much more specific. Ideally, the parliament example would refer to a specific decision and how it was successful. Your personal experience paragraph needs 1-3 instances of specific times where cooperation happened. I am a writing teacher. NOTHING is more important to your development right now than learning how to be specific.