Grade my sat essay?

JoshuaL
Mon, 26 Dec 2011 13:11:33 +0000

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You contrived an articulate essay with several cogent arguments. I think that your personal example contributes little to the essay; thus, you could eliminate this paragraph and develop the other two paragraphs better. SAT essay readers award students with examples in literature or history over personal examples because it exhibits a wealth of knowledge in these subject areas. Good work overall.