Grade SAT Essay [yet again]?

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Sun, 20 Apr 2008 08:46:37 +0000

@laserbase - Thank you for replying. The last sentence did not make sense because it is total bollox. *sniff

@jaimeastorga2000 - Thank you very much for taking out so much time to go through my whole essay. I appreciate it a lot. =]

I knew my examples weren’t that bad; it’s the intro and the conclusion I struggle with (because I’m bad at generalizations). I cannot say I don’t care for a higher score, but I do want to improve my essay. Your advice will definitely be taken into consideration. In fact, I hope that when I post a few other essays you’ll also tweek them.

After all that, I know it’s a rather trivial question (but since it’s for a practice test), what would you rate my essay as? After reading about the grammatical errors, I don’t even feel like it deserves an 8.