Grade This Essay? (will grade back)

Slayeraven
Fri, 05 Jun 2015 10:16:38 +0000

I think the essay is quite coherent and focused. You’ve used some solid examples and linked them to the prompt and your thesis. This is excellent for a second try. I would definitely give it a 10-11 (5 ish). My only suggestion would be that you spend more time explaining your reasoning than describing the example itself since they often look for ‘signs of critical thinking’. Also, make sure you do this essay under timed conitions, without which anything you write won’t accurately predict how you will do on the actual test.

Are you giving it this Saturday as well?
Also, could you please grade my essay?