HELP EDITING ESSAY / OPINIONS

bjkmom
Wed, 16 Sep 2015 10:00:42 +0000

OK, for starters: do NOT post your essay online!!! It opens you up to plagiarism and to accusations that you yourself have plagiarized it from the person who posted it online.

Now, as to your actual paragraph:
What is this the answer to? What’s the prompt?

And, maybe more important, what’s the point? Yep, I get that you love debate. (Me too. I coached it for 18 years, though LD, not Public Forum.) So what? How does this give the colleges a reason to admit you?