Help me cut down essay a bit?

sarahxbrooks
Sat, 29 Oct 2011 16:42:12 +0000

Just finished a draft of an essay for University of Maryland, which has a max word limit of 300. However, my essay is 368. Whoops.

I would love to have some help as to what I should cut out!

If you are willing to help, I’ll PM the essay to you straight away I am trying to get the app in by November 1, so pretty speedy feedback would be awesome <3

I’m choosing to do an essay of my choice, so I wrote about expectations.