Help Me!!!!!!!

wjddbsdl89
Sat, 24 Feb 2007 14:51:52 +0000

My SAT score is miserable!!!
whenever I grade the practice exams and convert the scores, I am really scared to take the real one; I haven’t taken it before…

Especially CR and essay part are killing me.

I usually get 500-540 for CR, 600 for writing, and 710-750 for math section.

If I study SAT with bluebook, and memorize 30 words and read magazines daily, how much can I raise the SAT socre whithin 4months?

How can I read the SAT reading passages accurately on time??

Please give me some practical strategies to get at least 2100 by june!!!

I am desperate!!!

I need your help!!!

Also,

I would really apreciate your kindness if you can grade this practice Essay and give some suggestions

Are we free to make our own decision in life, or is our decision always limited by the rules of society?

Since the beginning of the human history, people have made their own choices based on their beliefs and values. However, people have always had to co-exist with one another, therefore, people’s liberal decisions have consequently been limited by the rules of the society. Because human is an animal, constantly trained by the rules of the society, it has been almost impossible for him or her to make a choice solely based on one’s preferences. The protagonist in the famous novel “The Catcher in the Rye” and intolerant Adolf Hitler during WW2 suggest such point of view.

The Protagonist in the novel “The Catcher in The Rye” deeply frustrated by the strict rules and disciplines in the society and decided to live his own life regardless to others’ stereotypical point of views. He made all the decisions that the rules of the society do not accept as ‘adequate’, and did all the things opposite to what the usual teenagers do during their youth. However, at the end, when he waked with his adorable little sister, he was exhausted to fight against the highly constructed social perspective. Besides the many themes in this novel, Salinger, the author of the book, “The Catcher in the Rye” insinuated that people are, at some point, succumb to the generally accepted rules of the society.


On the top of the example of the famous novel, the judgment towards Adolf Hitler, the notorious tyranny during WW2, suggests that although human sometimes makes the decisions without the concerns of the established moral rights in the society, he or she would be consequently blamed as the social blunder and be outcast from the society. Although Hitler killed thousands of people to make a “cleaner world”, he was later judged as the infamous devil.

People live in a democratic society and it seems as if all individuals can make the decisions with out any restrictions. However, when people murder, they have to go to a jail and be punished, and when students skip the class, they receive a detention after school. As the novel and the people in the history insinuate, it is not the solely liberal decisions that people make. Although people think they make liberal decisions, it is really the society that judges, fixes and makes the people’s ‘accepted decisions’.

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