Help me w/transfer essay?

chasethecarrot
Sat, 26 Feb 2011 17:03:51 +0000

I’m lost on my transfer essay. I’ve written it but it’s three pages, and I’ve already had to murder my other essays to condense them as well. There’s just too much information, how am I supposed to do this? How do I convince these schools that I’m a good fit, really demonstrate my value as a student and person without giving them the full scope of my talents/abilities/dreams/triumph over adversity etc etc.??

So, this is where I am. If anyone would be willing to help, I would really appreciate it. I’m also just not sure that my essay contains enough truly compelling reasons to admit me…advice, anyone??

If you can help, please let me know and I will pm my essay over. Thanks so much!

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