Help me with my essay PLEASE!!!

eCoachJen
Wed, 28 Nov 2012 13:16:59 +0000

My opinion is to shorten your story on the trip to 1-2 paragraphs. For the rest of the essay, show through your storytelling how “you make the most out of your life” and did not take your pamper life for granted.

Hope this helps. Best of luck! :)