Help me with my FBLA speech!

StevenSeagal
Tue, 19 May 2009 20:34:25 +0000

Most importantly, however, we have the unparalled experience

I would remove the “however.” Also, if the products are cheap and numerous enough or the product will be used for a very short amount of time, then the average customer would probably get the cheapest out of the lot or stick to brand loyalty rather than going out of their way to find the one with the best quality. That doesn’t have to do with the meaning of your speech though lol, just me being pedantic ;)