HELP, PURDUE ESSAY DUE 15th JAN! NEED SUGGESTIONS/REVIEWS/FEEDBACK PLEASE!

hamzzaa
Thu, 10 Jan 2013 02:34:39 +0000

Dear all college confidential users,

Up until now, I was receiving feedback on essays from a cousin, an aunt, a teacher, and my girlfriend, but they are all busy, and I’m feeling very unsure of my Purdue Essay.

Here’s the question that I decided to answer:

“Envision yourself near the end of a fulfilling, lifelong career and you just published your autobiography. Share the title and introduction.”

I feel it’s a decent-ish essay, but for some reason, I’m very unsure as well.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HELP ME!

Please post an email address, send a message, or any other medium you prefer, and I can send you my essay.

If I don’t get any replies, I’ll post my essay here in a day in hopes of any and all feedback.

Thank you and to all fellow applicants: Good Luck :D

Regards,
Zee