Help with Appealing Academic Dismissal

1203southview
Tue, 05 Jan 2016 05:27:03 +0000

I think it reads better with a stronger ending with Lindagaf’s suggestions put in place. I would just change this:
“For example, in general education classes, such as Intro to Psychology and Intro to Sociology suffered by dropping from an A grade to a C grade because of my lackluster effort in attendance.” to adding the words “my grades” before …suffered by dropping. Good luck!