Help with my essay?

gomdorri
Sat, 09 Jun 2012 19:03:19 +0000

So for the SAT essay, would it be alright to have a choppy essay? I have a lot of trouble thinking of transition phrases, and that took up a lot of my time while writing the essay (I was originally going to include an example of a character from a kdrama who was unsuccessful despite his talents and I was going to talk about one of my life experiences and observations at school).

Now I know that I should get straight to the point, and so does collegeboard care most about that, and not so much about the fluidity of the writing?