Help with why tufts supplement!

ronniedab
Wed, 28 Dec 2011 21:32:56 +0000

Thanks hungryhippo and broadwaybaby! I made those changes and I’m a lot happier with it!
DanAdmiss, for my second supplement i’m very happy with it, but it’s 480 words. I know that’s a lot longer than it’s supposed to be, but I feel like it all sheds light on how my community and family influence me. Should I still cut it down a little?