How bad did I screw up my essay?

uppersanddowners
Sun, 06 Oct 2013 00:05:15 +0000

I wrote a solid intro paragraph and used Kate Chopin’s “The Awakening”, the U.S/Soviet arms race during the Cold War era, and GMOs for examples. I was glad to be able to include an ideal set of examples (one literary, one current events, one historical) and am pretty happy with my conclusion as well. Actually managed to write a half-decent five paragraph essay, and I didn’t leave any space at all on the two pages provided, so I think I have a shot at a 12. The Arms Race as an example is pretty weak though simply because the Cold War is an overused example, but hey it certainly could have gone worse