How can I do this essay without arrogance?

theonenonlynat
Wed, 01 Aug 2007 00:09:32 +0000

From what I just read you do not sound arrogant at all, anything but actually.

This may not be the best advice, and probably not what you’re looking for, but be as genuine as possibly. Start from the beggining (when you were young) and go on untill the end. Focus more on showing instead of telling. Basically less facts and figures…show a more personal side, show more heart (which you know how to do already, I can tell!).

I think you already know how to write this! Your essay will give justice to not only Harlow, but to every person that has strived and worked for something (This includes yourself, the main focus of the essay!)Well, hope I helped in anyway possible! Good luck