How can I do this essay without arrogance?

ADad
Wed, 01 Aug 2007 00:55:17 +0000

You know the drill–show, don’t tell.

“I am like my relative, the great executive” = telling, arrogant.

"I try to run my business the way that Harlow Curtice ran GM (not necessarily mentioning the relationship). Here is a typical day for my business …, or here is how my business started, or here is how I care for my customers… – or whatever, show something central to your business = showing, not arrogant.