How is this essay topic?

sdfg789
Sun, 17 Oct 2010 09:14:27 +0000

I wrote about a friend who had Asperger syndrome and inspired me to be tolerant, the result being that I got many peers to stop being rude to/ gossiping about a kid who showed all signs of having Asperger’s. [It’s really not as cheesy as it sounds summarized]

It’s told in story format, and is about 1000 words.

Besides themes of tolerance, and displays of leadership, there doesn’t seem to be much else. I mean, no sense of academic vitality (though the academics show pretty clearly on my resume) or an epiphany of all my philosophical beliefs.

…And yes, I have been reading that 50 successful essays book. I find a lot of the themes in that book overused, actually >___>

So, does it seem to display enough about character (from a non academic point of view)? And is it too long?