How to end the essay.....?

dostoyevsky
Tue, 28 Dec 2004 18:22:41 +0000

30th street? dont you get off at 34th? i do that when im going on the market-frank line

my last bit was - During my junior year in high school, I analyzed myself in terms of what type of a career I wanted; I decided that international business would be a worthwhile career for me to pursue. I recognize the talents I have in math, communication, and entrepreneurship; however, I understand that I need to convert my relatively “crude natural resources” into a versatile, efficient, polished “product”. After finding myself more and more interested in Wharton, it hit me; the Wharton Undergraduate Program will undoubtedly act as my launch pad, helping to propel me into a business world more complex and competitive than the candy-selling one could ever be. (in the beginning i wrote about how i sold tootsie rolls for a buck each in like 5th grade to my stupid classmates) <– i like doing the “come full-circle” stuff in essays

(i wrote a “why penn?” essay and a supplementary “why wharton?” essay (the above excerpt is the ending of the latter)…