How to identify child abuse

VeryHappy
Fri, 12 Feb 2016 13:05:43 +0000

Well, one of my beefs with the paragraph is that it begins, "Much of this . . . " There is no antecedent for “this.”

“Profoundly traumatize”: Redundant.

“Many youths of our age”: Ambiguous. Is this, many youths who are as old as we are? Or is this, youths of today?

“Open your eyes to it and pull down the masked curtain”: Mixed metaphor.

“Ethically genuine”: What in the world is that?

“Circumvent”: You mean, eliminate?

“To positively facilitate such goals”: What goals? Is there an antecedent?

Seriously, I’d give this a D-.