I am struggling to write a captivating essay

billythegoldfish
Sun, 25 Aug 2019 00:30:53 +0000

these are great starting points. I like #1, but you need to focus on the positives of the situation rather than the struggles., and have specific anecdotes illustrating mom’s awesomeness.

3 is a home run though. unless I am really just out of touch, I can't imagine there will be many other essays like it out there. but again, I would try to shy away from describing the struggles and barriers, and instead focus on quirky anecdotes that might make your points without being preachy.