I am struggling to write a captivating essay

Empireapple
Sat, 24 Aug 2019 08:37:12 +0000

I like topics 1-3.

I am kind of impressed that someone your age teaches a financial literacy class. Wow! It makes me wonder how you know about that and how you got into that.

I do think the value of hard work and how it came from your mom could be a great essay.

I like the football story but my thought is rather than to write about the barriers of that experience, to write about who was helpful, what you learned about yourself and others, and how positive it was. Its JMHO and although I know it’s an essay prompt about barriers you’ve faced I think our culture is getting tired of perceived barriers.

For what it’s worth, I think most kids have had a bland life and that’s a good thing!