I can't believe I procrastinated so much. Essay feedback?

<p>I have 1 long (500) and 1 short (250) essay- I was wondering if anyone could read it and give me some suggestions before I send it in?</p>

<p>pm it! (10 char)</p>

<p>sure, i'll read it.</p>

<p>PM me, ill read and edit it</p>

<p>Me too! ....</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>


<p>I'll read it. PM it over.</p>

<p>I'll read it too. PM</p>

<p>I'll read it - PM to me</p>

<p>yeah i will. pm over</p>