I can't believe I procrastinated so much. Essay feedback?

Applying to College
#1

<p>I have 1 long (500) and 1 short (250) essay- I was wondering if anyone could read it and give me some suggestions before I send it in?</p>

#2

<p>pm it! (10 char)</p>

#3

<p>sure, i'll read it.</p>

#4

<p>PM me, ill read and edit it</p>

#5

<p>Me too! ....</p>

#6

<p>i'll read it</p>

#7

<p>bbbuummmppp.</p>

#8

<p>I'll read it. PM it over.</p>

#9

<p>I'll read it too. PM</p>

#10

<p>I'll read it - PM to me</p>

#11

<p>yeah i will. pm over</p>

#12