I feel sick about this essay

frankechanel
Mon, 20 Oct 2008 03:10:34 +0000

its a personnal statment about the circumstances of my upbringing. Ive edited, added, and cut and got a lot of different feed back.

Some people have said it is powerful and moving.
Others have said it does not reveal enough about me.

I would be so grateful for any input.
thanks