I need help summarizing my extracurricular activities

Bluesky432
Sun, 31 Dec 2023 23:57:43 +0000

First- commendable list!! Just at a quick glance you need to find another word for “organized” as you have used it multiple times and you need to describe an “impact” your activity had. For example - an example of the impact your beach clean up had. Clears 200lbs of plastic? Resulted in reopening of beach……etc. hope this helps! And I’m not being critical- you have a nice variety and did overall a nice job. Just trying to help for past experience