I'm so Confused

Mewcat60
Sat, 09 Nov 2013 18:32:32 +0000

I agree with bomerr, be less negative. I think the second paragraph gives me the idea that youre antisocial, which isnt great for major colleges. You sound like you want to stay home forever. Maybe say that the lessons you learn at home are different from the lessons you learn outside, though both are important.