is my essay ivy league material!?

ivyleague22
Sun, 14 Nov 2010 21:49:07 +0000

Im applying to ivy league schools but my essay isnt that great. I know some of you might say that as long as i have good scores, grades, ec, community service, and all the other things one not so good essay wont matter. I really need my essay to grab their attention into accepting me!!! SO PLEASE IF YOU CAN… READ MY ESSAY AND GIVE ME REMARKS AS TO HOW I CAN REALLY IMPROVE IT!