Is my idea good?

ADad
Fri, 04 Jul 2008 22:25:35 +0000

I’m not sure what the big lesson to be learned is



You don’t imo have to have a “big lesson learned”, particularly when you have to “work on it” to find one. Such “lessons” often are impersonal and “tellings” when the adage is “show, don’t tell.”

Imo, stick to personal, detailed and revealing.