Is my response appropriate?

Ranza123
Sat, 16 Aug 2014 22:49:29 +0000

To me it sounds extremely bitter. Even if you are extremely bitter, you should make it sound like you learned from this experience and refrained from ever using your cell phone in class again. Saying the teacher unfairly called you out and saying that all the other kids were doing it makes you sound fairly immature. Even if that’s the truth, it’s probably detrimental to say that.