Is my response appropriate?

Johndrn889
Sat, 16 Aug 2014 22:39:16 +0000

So I’m filling out the early action SJU application, and it is asking me if i have you ever been disciplined for misconduct, suspended, expelled, or required to withdraw from any secondary or post secondary educational institution. I have and i explained it as so:
“My free period teacher had an unreasonable bad judgement of me since the beginning of the year and one day I called my father from my cell phone to come pick me up. The next day I got called down the office and was told my teacher had written me a referral for using my cell phone. While school policy forbids cell phone use, nearly every teacher in my school does not implement this rule, including the teacher who gave me this referral. Every day i would see my fellow classmates use their phones(texting, calling, playing games etc.) yet i was the only one that got detention throughout the whole year. Mind you, this had been my first and only referral in the entire duration of my adolescent education, so while the standard punishment would have been one day of in-school suspension i only got two days of detention.”
Everything i wrote on the app is 100% true and so basically what I’m wondering, Is my response appropriate? Should i make any changes?