Is one example enough for the SAT essay?

PaprikaC
Thu, 25 Sep 2014 06:57:20 +0000

Hi everyone! I was just wondering if using one example is sufficient for a score greater than 10 on the SAT. I know length is important, and I do make sure I fill up the two pages and I usually use more than 400 words. I typically do my intro, one paragraph supporting one point, another paragraph supporting another point, and a conclusion. For example, if the prompt goes something like: “Is teamwork necessary for success, or can success be achieved single-handedly?” I would have an intro that states my view that teamwork is necessary; then, I would use my example to write a paragraph on why teamwork is needed for success; and after that, another paragraph using the same example to also explain why trying to achieve success on one’s own is often more detrimental than beneficial. I not only provide details, but also observations and analysis. I summarize my observations in my conclusion and apply the concept to general human nature. Considering all of this, wouldl I be able to get above a 10 (hopefully a 12) on the SAT essay? Some people have told me that obtaining such a score by using just one example is a rare occurrence.