Is this a good college essay topic?

Amberlanya_Herwana
Tue, 09 Jul 2019 17:35:37 +0000

Well, this girl has not had any particular accomplishments of her own. She is stuck in the same situation, cleaning homes every single day to make a living. But despite being stuck here, everytime I visited her she would always be extremely happy with a bubbly and positive personality. She would warmly greet everyone she met. This made me realize that people can find happiness within themselves, regardless of the circumstances around them. When I returned to America, little things completely stopped botehring me. I felt it was my moral obligation to make 100% use of all the oppurtunties I had been blessed with, and that is where the clubs and volunteering and putting full effort into everything comes in.
I am just hoping I can phrase this kind of idea in a profound and non-cliche way.