is this a great common app topic?

ivyleaguegirl95
Sat, 02 Jun 2012 22:11:54 +0000

I am apart of the Class of 2013 and I wanted to start writing my essay early. The topic I thought about writing is how I felt when I moved from Africa to the US when I was in 2nd grade. I want to write about all the dreams and opportunities I knew would be available to me here. And then talk about various things I’ve been able to do because of the opportunities available to me and how I am full of dreams now?

How does that sound? I want to know of any suggestions you guys have.