Is this an 11-12?

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Wed, 08 Jul 2009 20:41:55 +0000

I think you’re definitely in the 10-12 range. There are some problems, but when I look back at my 12 essays I am shocked at how poor they seem in retrospect.

GammaGrozza does raise a valid point, though. I’d try to spend less time summarizing plots and more time explaining how the plots relate back to your thesis. As it is now, you spend 4-5 sentences summarizing what happened and only one sentence explaining how it proves your point.

Content aside, I think your writing style is very nice.