Is this essay a 8+? Please grade.

maributt
Thu, 02 Aug 2007 15:33:36 +0000

yes, it’s good, but the grammar/spelling/diction/many needless commas and the shifts between 1st person and 3rd were distracting to me, so i as an individual grader would have given it a 4, but there probably aren’t two me’s so i don’t know if it’s more than 8. also, talking about an atheistic school might not be the best example to use for someone you don’t know, but the two examples are probably sufficient.