Is this essay any good? 11? 12? 10?

Lelyke
Fri, 30 Nov 2012 10:33:30 +0000

Its not so bad, you analyzed in the end. But I was confused at some moments and I had to reread. For example, " His decision not to contributed in his understanding of himself and his belief in the importance of loyalty." That confused me until I reread it, SAT essay graders don’t have time to ponder on essays and read each essay in about 2-3 minutes. So make it understandable enough. You might want to develop your essay points a little more, I didn’t feel the Huckleberry fin passage. How did they understand each other just like that. It was all too sudden, elaborate a little more. I know elaborating can be a b**** in SAT Essay cause its just 25 minutes. That was a challenge so try. I’ll give it a 9.