Is this "hook" worth mentioning and if so, how do we do it?

soozievt
Thu, 23 Sep 2010 21:26:46 +0000

Right…I should clarify that it is more of a human interest that adds flair to the Why X College essay, but I would not classify it as a “hook” as the thread title suggests. If she were a development case, it would be a hook, but I don’t think you are saying that is the case. Still, it would make her Why X College essay statement a bit unique.