Is this sentence awkward for an essay?

ItsComingHome
Wed, 09 Jan 2019 08:00:55 +0000

@jym626 does it seem awkward or will colleges be like ’ meh. doesn’t matter '? by the way, it is not a sentence of my common app essay. I have taken a gap year and I didnt apply to colleges in my senior year. This is my essay to explain my break in education progression i.e. gap year essay.