Is this sentence awkward for an essay?

ItsComingHome
Wed, 09 Jan 2019 08:10:23 +0000

@jym626

Here is some context :

“I engaged in a science research project for around three months. I’ve always been someone who loves to learn concepts beyond my concepts through exploration. Taking a gap year allowed me to fulfill this motive” … and so on where I describe what the research was about