Is Topic #3 supposed to be a story? (Please help)

SoulinNeed
Wed, 06 Sep 2006 22:26:35 +0000

Is it? Because the way I wrote it is with a couple lines of dialogue of me asking the men in the brunch different questions and having them respond. The rest of the time I spent talking about my views on the men and the ideas they represented such as Gandhi and pacifism. Also, I picked how foods for the menu based on what I felt each person would like.

I’m thinking now that maybe I did it wrong and that it’s supposed to be a story with heavy interaction between the men and it isn’t supposed to involve my views on them. Can someone please help me?

For anyone wondering, I have indeed decided to apply to University of Chicago, anyone who sent me their essay for feedback, know that I have deleted them from my computer and I’m doing a different topic so as to not start any problems.