Look at my Resume!!!

BoardinSchool
Mon, 14 Dec 2009 03:53:51 +0000

This is the first resume I’ve ever made…Could I make my resume look better by arranging it in a different way? Can anyone tell me what to take out and what to add(explanation of ec…etc)?! Thanks!!!

Music



Youth Orchestra

9,10,11,12 3hrs/week.
July 06~present First violin chair, Concert Master

high school Chorus

10,11,12    4hrs/week

Jan 08~ present Member, Violin Accompanist

Spring&Winter Concerts at *high school

10,11,12    2times/yr

Jan 08~present Performer-solo violin

Spirit Band

12 Aug 09~present
2hrs/week Violin

Chamber Music (National Contest)

9 July 06~Nov 06
3hrs/week 2nd Violin, Represented group of the City.

Festival of Young Performers (Charity concert)

9 July 06~Nov06
1hr/week Volunteer Musician.
Solo Violin, Piano, Flute

St. Anglican Church Choir

9   August 06~Nov 06

2hrs/week member

****High School(different high school) choir

9 August 06~Nov06
3hrs/week Piano accompanist
Clubs

International Club

11,12 Jan 09~present
3hrs/week Founder/President

Global Action Club

11,12 Aug 08~present
3hrs/week Active Member

Craft Club

11,12 Jan 09~presnt
1hr/week Member

**** Courier(newsletter)

11,12 Aug 09~present
3hrs/week Staff in charge of boarding school news

Boarder’s Council

11 Jan 09~May 09
2hrs/week Representative

National Honors Society

11,12 Jan 09~present Member
In-School Activities

Student Ambassador

11,12 August 08~present Member

Representative of English Dpt.

10 March 07~Dec07 In charge of all the materials for English classes.
Sports

Junior Varsity Netball

9 July 06~Dec 06
4hrs/week Member

Junior Varsity Badminton

9 July 06~Dec 06
2hrs/week Member
Community Service

Mission trip to Nicaragua

Summer 2009 8/8/09~8/16/09

96 hours. Volunteer

Service trip to southwest(helped Navajo)

Tutoring at **** Welfare center

Summer 2008 7/1/08~8/7/08
1hr/week English Tutor

Tutoring at Thensted Center  11

Oct 08~ March 09
1hr/week Tutor
Work Experience

Chinese Takeout

9 July 06~Dec06
15hrs/week Part-time worker

Awards
Trinity College of London Violin Grade 8 Certificate- 2006, 9th grade
Prize for Music. (highest GPA in music), achievement in music – 9th
Tr-Parish Language Festival French Award – 11th
High honors 10th, 11th (GPA 4.0 or higher)
Merit in Precalc 10th
Merit in physics 11th
Merit in chemistry 11th
Merit in religion 11th
The Mary Filzwilliam RSCJ Award for commitment to a deep respect for intellectual values – 10th
The Susannah Boubreaux RSCJ Award for commitment to the building of community – 11th

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