Looking for feedback on an essay

salsabeefsteak
Fri, 23 Nov 2007 18:32:00 +0000

Would anybody be willing to give me some feedback on a one-page essay that I wrote for a competitive college? Please PM me if you are willing. Thanks!

P.S. I’ll look at and make corrections to anybody’s essay if they return the favor. I’ve been told I’m an excellent writer (for what my stupid English teacher’s opinion is worth).