Merit Scholarships

Annabanana123
Sat, 14 Dec 2013 12:42:12 +0000

A little off-topic, but was gonna see if I could get some opinions before I turn this in.
For one of the PTA essays I chose the “Support an antihero from your favorite superhero movie” prompt. I included a little language, because I thought this is how my villain would talk. Thoughts as to whether I should delete that (it’s only two times… the alternative word for Donkey and then something about “go to hell”)? I think it adds a lot to his character so don’t want to unless you guys think that the review board would view this as negative.