More Common App essay troubles!

nh2433
Sun, 28 Sep 2008 22:42:49 +0000

somewhat similar situation. my teacher gave me an 84 on a coll. app. essay because mine was 800ish words when she more or less 500.
So i gave it to like 10 ppl to edit, and I am down to like 550, yet i feel the essence is not as strong