my first attempt on writing an essay topic :every situation has a however"

Woandering
Thu, 27 Nov 2014 18:11:03 +0000

Organization: 4 No smooth transitions.
Thesis: 3 weak and semi-unclear
Grammar: 5 Strong
Diction: 5 Strong
Supporting Details: 3 You don’t have enough analysis and explanation of your examples.

Overall:4

(P.S To those of you who have seen me grade before: yes, I changed Sentence Variety to Supporting Details once I found a better SAT rubric.)