My super amazing college essay topic(?)

topasalacqua13
Tue, 01 Jun 2010 21:28:49 +0000

Hey guys, so I am a junior and the whole college hype is just starting for me - this is my idea for my college essay, tell me what you guys think:

I want to write about my record collection, how I see my record player as a “time machine”, and how I feel like I am going back in time whenever I handle my records.
They are classic rock vinyl records, and I also want to mention how people usually won’t associate me, an African-American teenager, with classic rock 60s/70s/80s records.
I also want to tie in my love of the past into this…

comments/suggestions? The topic might seem a bit chaotic, I’d like to know how to make it more of a straight line essay instead of a random and, well - chaotic.