Need Help! MY UC DAVIS WAITLIST ESSAY!

MYOMOO
Mon, 26 Mar 2012 14:41:17 +0000

Undoubtedly, Davis is my top choice to pursue my undergraduate studies and dedicate myself to the community.

As I have a strong passion for high energy and nuclear physics, Davis provides me a lot of opportunities to do researches. During summer vacation, I can participate in Research Experience for Undergraduate program and many other research programs to work with faculty and graduate students on nuclear physics and experimental particle physics research. With unparalled facilities such as LUX detector, I can get the most accurate data on neutrino from the experiments and analyze them with research groups. I will get a large amount of research experience, valuable interpersonal communication skills and useful experimental knowledge. They will help me a lot to achieve my goal of finding a feasible way to generate nuclear fusion.

Also, I can greatly contribute to Davis community and enrich its diversity.
As a first generation Chinese immigrant, I clearly understand the economic and social situation of new immigrants. I can run for senate in ASUCD to represent Chinese immigrant students and let the community know their problems. Moreover, I will vigorously participate in events in cross cultural center not only to make friends with multicultural people and learn their cultures, but also to show them the beauty and antique of Chinese culture.

Do you think it is OK?