Need Help with supplements. Would this be okay?

matrixsurgeon
Fri, 27 Dec 2013 12:38:52 +0000

first of all, NEVER EVER post essays or drafts, etc of your application to any public forum. If you want feedback, you should ask people and then PM it so its not public knowledge…This is for your safety.

Second of all, New Yorker Guy is correct. You pick either to commit or not to commit. If you chose Biology or whatever talk about it and don’t refer to like “maybes” or “unevenness” about your choice cause it will only hurt you. Be specific concerning your actual interests within biology (microbiology, ecology, genetics, etc) and WHY…That is the most key part, the WHY part. Whether it be personal experience, huge interest, passion, etc make it sound genuine. If you want, you can PM me an essay if you want some feedback. just my .02 cent