Need insight. Please, grade my essay.

rhshanks
Sat, 29 Dec 2012 09:10:34 +0000

I have made a similar thread previously and have added a second essay which was the above one. If possible, I would appreciate a grade of 0-6 although it took me 32 minutes to finish this essay. I had some trouble coming up with examples to support my thesis, yet it seemed that the prompt of the question was shockingly easy.

I am currently studying to improve my essays because I may retake the SAT next year if my last scores weren’t enough.

Thank you