Need URGENT input on my Intellectual Vitality Essay

SAT128
Sat, 01 Dec 2012 00:15:19 +0000

It’s hard to say. Nothing much to criticize, but nothing that really stands out in much of a good way either. I also wrote about managing a business for my intellectual vitality essay, but I had tried to make it more of a personal experience involving serious hardship and isolation, rather than just ‘getting loans’ or ‘giving presentations’ or group mentality. Yours seems decent enough though, I probably wouldn’t change anything significant at this point tbh. Maybe work on the end like rebellion510 said for more of an impact