Need URGENT input on my Intellectual Vitality Essay

Eucliiris
Sat, 01 Dec 2012 18:52:41 +0000

Wildcat, I am not sure whether I am too late, but I see a critical error on the essay you posted. Every single sentence in you first paragraph starts with a prepositional phrase (I am not sure about the very first sentece, but I think you get my point). Varying sentence structure will help dramatically.