Need URGENT input on my Intellectual Vitality Essay

redchair
Sat, 01 Dec 2012 00:49:04 +0000

Running a business is a good topic, I think you just need to shift the focus on how the whole process racked your brain and promoted intellectual vitality rather than the events you actually did. Maybe one idea is to discuss different parts of your intellect – your work ethic, persuasion, and cooperation – and how running a business made you appreciate them more? The content seems mostly there but the focus seems more on the “what” of the events rather than “how” it shaped your intellectual development.