Need URGENT input on my Intellectual Vitality Essay

SAT128
Sat, 01 Dec 2012 00:24:13 +0000

I think it definitely shows intellectual development, but you may want to phrase it more clearly. Maybe have your ending tie it in with the whole intellectual development. You learned from the experience and have grown intellectually from it, with greater knowledge involving both leadership and collaboration having been gained from the process. Make sure you emphasize growth/change/development/new understanding on both a personal and intellectual level