Official SAT Essay Discussion

shimshimhey
Sat, 01 Mar 2008 22:44:29 +0000

Does anyone remember the question? All i remember are key words like

Groups or Organization having its members pursue goals or something like that?



State what you wrote about, and critique if he or she stayed on subject about the question…

I wrote about the french 3rd estates and my personal experience. I said that how the members of the 3rd estates all had goals in particular and that they all strived to pursue it. I had one example that was about Robespierre and how he had the goal of overthrowing the french gov’t. Then I went on talking about how each person on my football team had their own goals and that once they actually achieved that goal, not only does it benefits theirselves, but the whole group as well.