Oh dear lord I fell in love...

vayselav99
Sat, 07 Jul 2007 23:45:01 +0000

branderson925:

making assumption there is a “droop”…





branderson925:

And even if you such a ludicrous stament is true what the hell …





branderson925:

I was unaware the type of student you used those sort of things is what they were looking for



First of all, please find my run-on sentences.

Secondly, I have quoted a section of almost every sentence you wrote.

“You are either making AN assumption THAT there…”

“And even if (you???) such a ludicruous statement”

Comma after “true” and period after “down”.

You “almost” doubt? Whatever, dude. Yeah, okay, I didn’t get in. Grow up.

“I was unaware THAT the type of student WHO used THAT sort of THING is what they ARE looking for”

You’ve also have rogue commas throughout your last paragraph which should be moved elsewhere where they are actually missing. And it’s “aid” not “aide”. Other stupid lexical choices are evident throughout your post.

I will die from laughter if you manage to get accepted.

Please make me die happy.