Personal Story

overachiever91
Mon, 04 Jul 2011 19:43:15 +0000

Well, to be honest, kudos to you for all your hardships you have survived, but the story may really sound like a cliche… just think about it - the poor guy that comes to the USA from the middle east to persuade his American dream, have to work through college but still gets a perfect GPA. Imagine how many people with similar experience will apply and share their story. You need to write about something unique, you need to stand out and be special.