PLEASE BUTCHER my essay :)?

iwasjustwonderin
Sat, 25 Oct 2008 23:40:56 +0000

I’ll edit it if you want, but I’m usually good at editing overall details, ideas, etc in essays- I’m not sure if I’m as good in cutting down words/sentences though. Also, I am 09, so if you don’t feel comfortable with an 09er reading it, then don’t send it.