PLEASE BUTCHER my essay :)?

JoshuaGuit
Sat, 25 Oct 2008 13:38:53 +0000

Hi

I am looking for anyone who can help chop about 100 - 150 words off of my personal application essay!

I have 849 words so far on what I believe to be a pretty solid essay, but most of the colleges I am applying to only want around 700 and under… one wants 500!

So if anyone can help get rid of some unneeded words, I would really appreciate it!!

In addition to that, I really need help with some of my verb tenses… it gets mucky towards the end of my essay.

Again, thanks to anyone who will help! If you want I will PM you the topic, but it will take up 2 message spaces. If you want me to email it to you, either leave your email here or pm me it

Thanks again!!